Gotham Garden

Let's go with a photo prompt again.  (Honestly, I've been so caught up with NaNo that I didn't have a clue what I was going to do for this week's prompt until I sat down. Maybe it's better this way, as it's a surprise for me, too.)

Digital Blasphemy has a free page where they rotate through some of their wallpapers that you can download without even being a member.  That's where I got the picture for this week:

"Gotham Garden - Autumn"
(I hesitated to put the title here - I hope it doesn't influence what you think of the picture.)



Enjoy!

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My response:

The crisp autumn breeze caught my hair as I stepped out the front door of the building.  I slowed my steps as I lifted my hands, catching the long, silky strands in my fingers and slipping them into an elastic.  My feet started on their way home while I was distracted, but when I finished securing my hair, I looked around. 

I liked working late shift.  I got to sleep in early, I didn't have to show up to work until 2pm, and I got off at 11pm, when most of the city had already gone to bed.  I loved walking home with the streets all to myself.  I could pretend it all belonged to me.  My city.

The glass and steel buildings gleamed in the moonlight, lights off in most of the windows.  If my history classes were right, that was a huge accomplishment.  Cities like this used to buzz all night, first with the after work crews, then with those who didn't know when to stop, and finally, the people who preyed on those who didn't know when to stop.  Those were trecherous days ... or so they told us.

But I had a hard time seeing my city as anything different than it was.  Clean, quiet, peaceful. 

That was about to change.

(This is where my mind launches off into "How are they all peaceful now?  Genetic modification?  Implants that zap them whenever they have violent thoughts?  Is it a Matrix scenario where the people in charge unplug anyone who causes trouble?  Or maybe they're just all afraid of Batman?  So many possibilities, so little time.)

Rampant



A while ago, I came across a recommendation to read "Rampant" by Diana Peterfreund.  I didn't know anything about the book, but my local library had it (although I'd have to wait a while), so I put it on hold. 

 

Then last week, after I'd forgotten all about it, I found it on the hold shelf when I was picking something else up.  (Yes, it was on hold for me, I didn't snatch someone else's book!)  Having forgotten that I'd requested it, I read the cover as I walked to the desk.  I was a little bewildered.  Flesh-eating unicorns?  Surely I wouldn't be interested in drivel like that ... who had recommended this book, anyway?

Wow.  Stop right there.  I was completely caught up within the first five pages.  By halfway through, I was telling my friends, and when I finished, I showed it off at book club.  Killer Unicorns!  Virgin Huntresses!  Wow, Peterfreund can sure cast a spell on her readers!!!

So, aside from sharing a book that I really enjoyed, I thought it would make a good prompt for the week: Let's put a twist on mystical creatures.

Ready, go!

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My response:

Phoebe was a flaming star of scarlett flying above the clouds, the sunlight gleaming golden on her feathers.  Her wings beat desperately against the high mountain winds as she spiraled upwards, to the top of the cliff.  A pair of travelers crossing the pass stopped and pointed, their weary march transforming into leaps and dancing at the sight of her.

Funny that they would count it lucky to see her; she, who was one of the two most unfortunate creatures to ever breath the air of Earth.

And all for a mistake.

They had won the battle.  The fighting was done.  Only a few, ragged soldiers spotted the battlefield as the victors climbed the hill to look over their domain.  Oberon and Tatiana laughed and sang, their voices lifting to the wind. 

Leonix strode across the field holding Phoebe by the hand.  She had given him her heart years ago, and now, at the end of this final battle, they were free of her family, free to marry.  Leonix grabbed a cart of wine from Phoebe's father's supplies and single-handedly towed it to the top of the hill.  He bowed before Oberon and thanked him for his assistance.  Then he held up the wineskin.

Oberon, smiling, gulped down half the wine, sucked in one last desperate breath, turned as green as the corpses of mountain trolls lying below, and then dropped down, equally as dead.

There ended Tatiana's generosity.  There she spoke her cruel curse.  There Phoebe and Leonix held each other for the first and only time.

For what could be worse than to live eternally, each death only followed by rebirth?  While Phoebe lived, Leonix slept, and only opon her death, did he live, while she in turn suffered dreamless sleep.

Phoebe reached out her claws, grasping at the ledge.  She tucked her wings in and hopped into the small cave.  This place was safe enough.  She'd been here before.  Agony throbbed through her body.  She recognized the pain of death ... but her heart sang with joy.  In just a few minutes, Leonix would be there.  Phoebe laid herself down on the hard rock, tired lungs struggling against her last breath.

And then he opened his eyes.  Phoebe could not see him, but his presence warmed her like the sun.  For the space of three heartbeats, they shared again the same air.  Phoebe reached out towards him, and Leonix reached back.  Their souls brushed past each other like satin sheets slipping away.  Phoebe shut her eyes.

A brilliant burst of flame filled the cave.  Phoebe's poor body burnt to cinders.

Leonix struggled to rise, shaking the ash from his feathers and stretching his wings as far as he could in the small space.  He opened his mouth and let out one low, mournful cry.  He had a lifetime until he saw her again.  He hopped to the opening, spread his wings, and took to the sky.

She slipped ...

Let's go for a more traditional prompt this week.  One that puts a million questions in your mind, like Who? Why? How?  How long? How did they feel about it?  Did anyone else care?

Our prompt for this week is:

"She slipped and fell, her arms flailing wildly."

(If "He" works better for you, go for it.  We're pretty lax on the rules around here.)

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My response:

Turning back to the window, Tara chewed her lip.  She was only one story up.  She couldn't jump, but she also didn't have to completely stop her fall.  If she could just slow it a little, she might survive.  The outside window sill was almost large enough for her to stand on, and the sides and top were more than enough for her to curl her fingers around.  If she stood up, she ought to be able to swing her body over to the pipe.

                Tara had to hold the window up as she pulled her body though, first sitting on the windowsill, then pulling her legs up one at a time.  Her skirt was a problem.  It billowed and furled around her, making it difficult to get her feet situated.  The silk on her bodice strained along the seams.  This gown was made for ballrooms, not escaping from prison.  Still, Tara managed to slide out.  The bottom of the window slid down her shins and landed on her toes as she stood on the sill, facing the building.  Tara's fingers clung to the window frame, and her stomach, while void of the light and power, clenched in a furious ball.  She'd never done anything like this before.

                The weight of the window rested heavy over the arches of her feet, but Tara couldn't help but think how, if this worked, the window shutting would work in her favor.  They wouldn’t know where she'd gone.  For just an instant, Tara wondered what she'd do when she got down – going back in wasn't an option anymore – but she pushed the thought aside, letting her tunnel vision take over again.

                Her nails scraped painfully against the grain of the wood.  Tara was grateful for the layer of new paint that spared her two handfuls of splinters.  With the window down, she could only barely make out the voices of the officers, but her gut told her she was running short on time.  She switched her left hand to where her right hand was holding on, then slipped her feet out from beneath the window, letting it fall closed as quietly as possible and balancing on the balls of her feet.  She took a shallow breath – a deep one would have pressed her away from the wall and made her fall – and reached out with her right hand towards the pipe.  Her fingers found the cold metal right before she lost her balance.  In a flash, her left hand followed her right and circled the pipe.  Her legs slipped out from under her and dangled.  She wasn't strong enough to hold herself up, so the pipe slipped through her grasp as she fell.  Luckily, she managed not to cry out.

                It would have worked perfectly according to her plan, if it hadn't been for the bracket holding the pipe to the wall, just at the height of a man above the ground.  Tara's right hand smashed into the bracket with a flash of pain, and she let go of the pipe, tumbling backwards.  The force of her body hitting the hard ground jarred her jaw, but the pain of her teeth smacking together was overwhelmed with the pain in her rear as she landed on her tailbone.

                Tears welled in her eyes from the effort to keep from crying out.  In her life, she'd never suffered such injuries, not to mention three at once, but if she valued her life, she didn't have time to feel sorry for herself.  She tucked her right hand to her chest automatically, the dark blood spilling down her gown.

                The two boys looked up at her, heads cocked.  She glared at them, and they turned back to their game.  The dog lifted his head and perked his ears at her, then went back to his sniffing.  In the moment of relative safety, Tara looked down to assess the damage to her hand.

(Whoops, I guess I got carried away.  She did fall, but her arms didn't flail wildly.  But hey, the prompt is just inspiration, right?)

The Shaded Path

First, a big THANK YOU to Ryan Bliss at Digital Blasphemy for letting us use his picture.  I'm in love with this one!



Picture prompts are some of my favorite.  Like I mentioned way back when, I like picture prompts because two people can look at the same picture and see very different things.

I can't wait to see what everyone else comes up with! :-)

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My response:

It took all the self control I had not to glance back as I turned the corner, leaving the party behind and stepping onto the dark walkway that surrounded the estate.  It was imperative that no one follow me.  Hopefully, no one noticed my leaving, but if they did and they saw me glancing back, it would look suspicious.  At least, that's what Lemak had told me, and he was the expert.

The moss grew thick on the gray stones, dulling the sound of my footsteps and wetting my thin slippers.  The moist air was almost heavy on my shoulders.  I paused a few steps in and studied a colorful bunch of flowers hanging down from the ceiling. 

I waited, counting slowly in my mind.  I'd never mastered counting precisely with the clock, so I counted six measures, instead of the five Lemak insisted on.  Better wait too long than too little.  A bee darted through the air and disappeared into a lily.  The harp and the murmuring of polite conversation continued behind me.  I was still alone. 

It wasn't easy to get a good grip on my silk skirt with my gloves on, but I hiked it up the best I could and hurried down the walkway.  As the pathway curved, I spied the figure waiting in the shadows.  I slowed my pace.  A bead of sweat ran down my back.  My bones tingled with anticipation.  I had dreamed of this as long as I could remember, but until Lemak, I never really thought it possible.

I gauged my steps and stopped in a patch of darkness, three arms lengths from the figure.  He was dressed in linen trousers, a white shirt, and a vest.  His leather boots were as silent as my slippers on the rocks as he stepped forward.

"You know who I am?" I asked.

He nodded.

"You know what I'm asking you to do?"

"Paying me to do," he corrected, his voice low.

"Yes." I pursed my lips.  I didn't like when servants spoke back.  "Paying.  But to be sure there are no misunderstandings, I want you to tell me what you're going to do."

"I'm to take the morning catch to the kitchens tomorrow, like as I always do, and when the cook's back is turned, I take the keys off the hook.  Then I use those to come back tomorrow night, slip up to her Majesty's room, and ..."  Apparently even murderers struggle with their conscience at times.  He slid his finger across his throat. 

That wasn't enough.  If he couldn't say it, how could I trust him to do it?  "And what?"

"I kill her."

"Whom?"

He sighed.  "The Princess, Evelyn Marie Antoinette."

"And if you get caught?"

He stepped into the light, leveling a vicious gaze at me.  "I do not get caught."

I raised my chin.  "If you get caught, and you allow yourself to be taken alive, you will not live long enough to give my name to anyone.  I've made arrangements to be sure of that."

"I don't doubt you have, my lady."  His eyes glinted in the darkness, and I could see I'd earned a measure of respect.  Then he continued.  "But see, miss, you made one mistake."  He stepped forward. 

My heart leaped in my chest.  What did he know that I didn't?!  My brain raced as I tried to keep my composure.  Likely he didn't know anything; he was just trying to scare me.

He cocked his head, looking over my shoulder.  My blood ran cold, and I repressed a shiver.  What kind of trick was he trying to play?  He'd come close enough now that if I turned to glance over my shoulder, he could close the gap between us before I could stop him.  I didn't want to fall for his feint ... but what if there really was something there.

I didn't have to wonder long.

A voice came from behind me, so close that I felt his hot breath on my neck.  "Your mistake was in believing that your father hired me to protect you.  He knew it was Evelyn who needed protecting."

Lemak.  Lemak who had carried me home when I'd fallen off my horse, who had brought me wildflowers from the mountain fields, and who had dreamed with me of the day I'd be Queen, when my sister was gone.

I could feel the press of his blade through the thin fabric of my dress.  With his free hand he reached up and snatched my satchel from my wrist, tossing it to the outlaw.  "You are free to go.  Now."  The man touched his forehead in farewell, then turned and trotted away.

Lemak wrapped his left arm around my waist and pulled me closer.  I felt the bodice of my dress loosen as the knife cut through it.  My skin was next.  I had to think quickly.  Even if he'd been planning on betraying me, Lemak had taught me alot in the past months.  I had an advantage; I just had to figure out what it was.

Then it came to me.  Carefully, I worked my fingers at the fabric of my skirt, pulling it higher.  The silk rustled, so I spoke to buy some time and cover.  "And what makes you think I didn't know about the whole scheme in the first place?  That maybe I was going along with it so I could be there to protect her, when I thought you were going to kill her with or without my help?" 

It was a flimsy excuse.  I knew it.  But if I could make him pause, just for a moment ...

"I was afraid of you.  I didn't dare tell you no."  I couldn't tell him I'd gone to my father.  If they'd been working together, he'd know I was lying. I had to think fast.

Now the silk slipped above the knife on my left thy.  I felt the handle, warm with my bodyheat.  I was better with my right, but I didn't have time, and thanks to the little trick I'd come up with myself, I didn't have to worry about accuracy.

"I told Uncle Viz.  I told him everything.  He was going to help me stop you."

I knew immediately Lemak believed me.  He relaxed his grip, grabbed my shoulder, and whipped me around to face him. 

I didn't even have to strike.  I felt the resistance in my left hand as the knife caught on his leg, slitting the fabric of his pants.

His dark eyes flashed with anger.  He caught my wrist in his hand.  My bones grated together, and I cried out, dropping my knife.  It thudded softly against the moss.

"Did you really think ..."  He stopped, blinked twice, and swayed on his feet.  His eyes found mine, and I could see the realization dawn in them.  "You didn't ... you ... thought ..."

His body dropped to the ground, spasmed once, then lay still.

I bent and retrieved my knife, returning it back to the sheath.  Lemak had laughed when I suggested I coat my blade in poison.  He teased me for having a wild imagination.  I sighed and allowed myself one last glance at his fallen body.  We could have been so good together.

But at least he'd shown me that my dreams weren't so far fetched.  I hurried back the way I'd come, leaning against the stone wall and letting the branches catch the fine fabric of my dress, tearing it further.  I'd cause quit the stir when I got back to the party.

Show me your Joy!

I read "Born to Run" by Christopher McDougall over and over when it first came out.  Why is that so odd?  At that point in my life, I had never run more than one mile - and that was only unwillingly, in middle school gym class.  The brilliance of McDougall is that, in spite of my own pitiful physical capabilities, I found myself wanting to run an ultra-marathon.  (A feeling which quickly dissipated when I put my shoes on and hit the track.  I run with friends three times a week, now, but I doubt I'll ever tackle a marathon, not to mention an ultra!)

But when you read a book ... I climbed Everest with Jon Krakauer. I ran an ultra with Christopher McDougall. 

Now, it doesn't have to be a sport or a strenuous thing, but the prompt for this week is to write about something you do that makes you happy, something that brings you joy in your life, and try (just try, don't stress about it) to pull us into your experience and let us feel like we're right there with you.

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My response:

It starts so simply.  One cup of milk, cold from the fridge, in the bottom of a glass bowl.  I grab the handle on the microwave and slip the bowl inside, snapping the door closed and tapping the "Add One Minute" button.  It hums to life.

Then the yeast.  I spent years baking breads that didn't rise until I spoke with an old grandma in Germany.  She told me I had to be kind to my yeast.  Warm it up, feed it, make it happy.  So I do.  I let the tap water run over my fingers into the sink, waiting until that perfect temperature.  When it's just right, I fill the cup, then stir a small spoon of honey into the water.  Not a lot, just enough, and then I suck the rest of the honey from the spoon.  I can almost taste the bread, even though it's still just an idea in my mind.  I measure out the yeast, stirring it into the water.

By now, the milk is hot, and the aroma washes over me as I open the microwave.  I pull open the bottom cupboard and dig through the containers.  Three tablespoons of white sugar join the milk, then two tablespoons of oil, and one teaspoon salt.  It's supposed to be one and a half teaspoons of salt, but after watching the sugar dissolve into the milk, the thought of salt makes me frown.  One cup of flour is just enough to start the mixture into becoming a dough, and now the milk is cooled down enough for the yeast.  I usually manage to get to this point without the yeast overflowing, but on some days, when my kids are helping, I don't get there in time, and the warm foam slides down the sides of the cup and gathers on the counter.

You might expect me to crack an egg or throw some potato flakes in.  If I'm making my great-grandma's rolls, I surely would.  But this recipe is special because it's my dad's.  He can't eat eggs, so he figured out a dough recipe that doesn't use them.  It's divine.  And it's my dad's, so it's special.

Now that the yeast is happy, the smell of it fills the kitchen.  I add flour to the mixture.  Sunlight streams in my kitchen window, through the yellow curtain.  I work the warm dough in my palms, adding flour until it's just right - not too dry like I did when I started making breads.

Inevitably, my mind slips back to my grandma, and my great-grandma.  They were the kind of women who didn't cook with recipes.  They did it intuitively, by feel.  I wonder if they'd be proud of me, or if they'd offer a gentle correction.  Probably both. 

I roll the dough together and let it rise.

When I start rolling, I always begin to doubt myself.  Is it too sticky?  Am I adding too much flour?  How big will it get?  Is it too thick?  But in the end, it turns out well, and I'm happy with it.

(Okay, this is where I noticed my attention is wandering.  My two little ones are playing behind me, and I've got to pick up my oldest from school.  Because this is a stretching exercise, and it's not supposed to be a chore, I'm going to stop now.  Even if my cinnamon rolls aren't finished yet.  Believe me, I did finish them, and they're wonderful.  But if you've read this far, I think you'll agree with me that this wasn't the most exciting topic, and I didn't do the best job of making it interesting.)

Guilty Pleasures

As per Wikipedia:
A guilty pleasure is something one enjoys and considers pleasurable despite feeling guilt for enjoying it. The "guilt" involved is sometimes simply fear of others discovering one's lowbrow or otherwise embarrassing tastes, such as campy styles of entertainment.

Like when a football player enjoys listening to Frank Sinatra.

Or when someone like me reads a zombie book. 

(But World War Z was really the book that started the whole craze, and The Zombie Survival Guide is really funny!)

Anne McCaffery used to be my guilty pleasure, when I was young and fantasy was so un-cool.  Now I admit my sci-fi/fantasy addiction with pride.   But I still hesitate to bring my Monster Hunter books by Larry Correia to book club (they're my husband's, I swear!!!). 

So, for the prompt this week, indulge your guilty pleasure.  Vampires who sparkle.  Werewolves with ripped abs.  Sappy romance.  You know what you like!

Me ... I'm going with the zombies!

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Rain pounded against the boarded up windows, and the wind howled through the eves of the old-fashioned mansion.  It wouldn't have been my first choice for a safe house, but the thirty foot concrete wall surrounding the property made up for the ancient building.  I sighed, thanking the lunatic who built the place.  When the dead had actually risen, it had been ten times worse than any Hollywood flick.  For the first time in two months, I felt like I was safe.

I first noticed her when the residents started bringing around food.  I was one of a dozen people they'd rounded up tonight and brought back to safety.  As the aroma of soup and fresh bread filled the room, most of us reacted like the half starved creatures we were. 

She did not.  She lounged awkwardly against the floorboards, one ankle twisted beneath her in a way that made my legs hurt just looking at them.  Her skin was still spotted with beads of sweat and rain.  An elastic lingered in her hair near the ends, as if it had once valiantly held a ponytail, but had finally given up the fight.  Her jeans were torn, and her jacket had bloodstains across the left breast. 

When they brought her a bowl, she didn't respond.  The residents didn't spare much time for her.  They set the food on the ground and walked away.  The young boy next to her gulped down his own serving and then eyed her portion. 

I don't know what made me do it, but I accepted my own dinner, then moved and sat between her and the boy.  Whatever she'd been through, she deserved it, and the boy would surely get more later.  She didn't notice me, or at least, she gave no sign of it.

The man who'd found me in the trailer park, Matt, thudded across the floor in his combat boots.  He had more guns on him than the Terminator.  Some of the other guys who had been with him sat around a table at one end of the long hall, chewing on their rolls and disassembling their weapons.

Matt stopped right in front of her, his mud-caked boots within arm's reach.  "You know how to clean a pistol?" 

My eyes darted from the boots up to his steely eyes.  He wasn't looking at me.  He was looking at her.

Slowly, her chest expanded, as if she'd been holding her breath and just decided against it.  She lifted her chin, bringing her empty gaze up to meet his.  "I've done it a time or two."

Matt gestured towards the table.  "We could use some help over here."

She rose, thin legs gathering themselves beneath her as she stood. 

Matt told me later that he had been testing her.  This wasn't one of the humanitarian camps that formed up.  The men in charge at The Mansion, as it came to be called, were soldiers.  They didn't have resources to keep dead weight, and they didn't know if they'd ever get outside help.  It was easier to toss the sick overboard, before anyone got too attached.

I watched her cross the room that night, already feeling like we were sisters.  I didn't know her name yet (Sarah), or how many times she would save my life (half a dozen).  But in that dark moment, when she chose to overcome her demons and rejoin us in that rotting old house, I knew I had met a true hero.

Four-letter Words

As far as cursing is concerned in literature, I think it has its place.  I think it can be an enriching part of world building; Brandon Sanderson does a fantastic job of developing the religions and mythologies of his worlds, and he incorporates that into how the characters swear.  Even in Christian novels, not all of the characters are always Christian, and eventually, someday, sometime, someone is going to swear.

BUT ... I think there are tactful and creative ways of swearing in our stories.  For example, I like to read the Pioneer Woman's blog. One of her latest posts had me laughing when she said, "I said one of the four-letter words that is permitted on some TV networks but that isn’t appropriate when one is sitting with an open Bible on one’s lap."

There are so many ways of cursing without cursing.
" ... he swore under his breath."
"Mom stubbed her toe and a cried out a word I didn't even know she knew."
" ... cursing rapidly ..."
" ... using language that would make a gangsta blush ..."

So, the prompt for this week is to write a short passage and incorporate swearing ... without swearing.  Good luck!

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My response:

The wind tore through my hoodie and I shivered.  I don't know what possessed me to leave my bed and come out on a night like this, but Darrel had been so insistent.  Leaves crunched underneath my converse and I actually heard an owl in the trees.  It was just like a scene from a horror movie, right down to my pesky little brother who I had to bring along when he caught me sneaking out and Darrel's hot girlfriend, Stacy.  How could she wear those shorts in this weather?  Her thighs must be ice by now.  Why'd Darrel have to bring her along anyway?  All she ever did was complain about hanging out with us.

Kevin cursed next to me, then hopped around on one foot. 

Darrel glowered at him, "Dude, keep quiet!"

Kevin stopped and wiped his shoe furiously across a patch of damp grass.  "I don't know what that is, but it smells like ..."

I swatted him with the back of my hand, "Watch it, Kev, my baby brother's here."  The last thing I needed was for Brad to tell Mom where he got his new vocabulary.

Stacy murmured something.  Luckily the wind carried away most of it, but I heard enough to know she was making fun of me.  Not only did she have to come along, but she couldn't keep her mouth shut either.

I had a few choice words for her, and I was too ticked at Darrel for making us come tonight to care about  setting him off.  I let Stacy know exactly what I thought of her.

When I was done, Brad stomped up next to me, turned a vicious gaze on Stacy, and repeated every word that had just come out of my mouth. 

Kevin and Darrel threw their heads back laughing.  So much for keeping his vocabulary pure.