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Rules:
1. Read the writing prompt, but only the prompt. I don't want your writing to be influenced by my (or anyone else's) response.
2. Sit down and spend 15-30 min writing whatever comes to mind. Poetry, prose, whatever you want, just write something. Don't make it something you labor over. Write. Enjoy.
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Monday, November 4, 2013

She slipped ...

Let's go for a more traditional prompt this week.  One that puts a million questions in your mind, like Who? Why? How?  How long? How did they feel about it?  Did anyone else care?

Our prompt for this week is:

"She slipped and fell, her arms flailing wildly."

(If "He" works better for you, go for it.  We're pretty lax on the rules around here.)

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My response:


Turning back to the window, Tara chewed her lip.  She was only one story up.  She couldn't jump, but she also didn't have to completely stop her fall.  If she could just slow it a little, she might survive.  The outside window sill was almost large enough for her to stand on, and the sides and top were more than enough for her to curl her fingers around.  If she stood up, she ought to be able to swing her body over to the pipe.

                Tara had to hold the window up as she pulled her body though, first sitting on the windowsill, then pulling her legs up one at a time.  Her skirt was a problem.  It billowed and furled around her, making it difficult to get her feet situated.  The silk on her bodice strained along the seams.  This gown was made for ballrooms, not escaping from prison.  Still, Tara managed to slide out.  The bottom of the window slid down her shins and landed on her toes as she stood on the sill, facing the building.  Tara's fingers clung to the window frame, and her stomach, while void of the light and power, clenched in a furious ball.  She'd never done anything like this before.

                The weight of the window rested heavy over the arches of her feet, but Tara couldn't help but think how, if this worked, the window shutting would work in her favor.  They wouldn’t know where she'd gone.  For just an instant, Tara wondered what she'd do when she got down – going back in wasn't an option anymore – but she pushed the thought aside, letting her tunnel vision take over again.

                Her nails scraped painfully against the grain of the wood.  Tara was grateful for the layer of new paint that spared her two handfuls of splinters.  With the window down, she could only barely make out the voices of the officers, but her gut told her she was running short on time.  She switched her left hand to where her right hand was holding on, then slipped her feet out from beneath the window, letting it fall closed as quietly as possible and balancing on the balls of her feet.  She took a shallow breath – a deep one would have pressed her away from the wall and made her fall – and reached out with her right hand towards the pipe.  Her fingers found the cold metal right before she lost her balance.  In a flash, her left hand followed her right and circled the pipe.  Her legs slipped out from under her and dangled.  She wasn't strong enough to hold herself up, so the pipe slipped through her grasp as she fell.  Luckily, she managed not to cry out.

                It would have worked perfectly according to her plan, if it hadn't been for the bracket holding the pipe to the wall, just at the height of a man above the ground.  Tara's right hand smashed into the bracket with a flash of pain, and she let go of the pipe, tumbling backwards.  The force of her body hitting the hard ground jarred her jaw, but the pain of her teeth smacking together was overwhelmed with the pain in her rear as she landed on her tailbone.

                Tears welled in her eyes from the effort to keep from crying out.  In her life, she'd never suffered such injuries, not to mention three at once, but if she valued her life, she didn't have time to feel sorry for herself.  She tucked her right hand to her chest automatically, the dark blood spilling down her gown.

                The two boys looked up at her, heads cocked.  She glared at them, and they turned back to their game.  The dog lifted his head and perked his ears at her, then went back to his sniffing.  In the moment of relative safety, Tara looked down to assess the damage to her hand.
(Whoops, I guess I got carried away.  She did fall, but her arms didn't flail wildly.  But hey, the prompt is just inspiration, right?)

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